Take a look at the question and the graph:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
This line graph illustrates the UK residence visits abroad and overseas to the UK during 1979 till 1999, while the bar graph displays the most popular countries when the UK resident visited in 1999.
Overall, we can clearly see from the line graph that the abroad visits of the UK residents rose steadily in1979 and it boomed till 1999.On the other hand in the bar graph, France had the highest number of UK visitors followed by Spain and Turkey had the lowest UK visitors.
On one hand, as we see in the line graph, visits abroad by UK residents began by around 10 million in 1979 then increased steadily to 20 million visitors and suddenly an upward trend over 50 million abroad visits until 1999.
On the other hand, it was readily apportion in the bar graph that France was the highest country that had more than 10 million visitors followed by Spain with less than 10 million and Turkey came at the end with less than 5 million visitors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... when the UK resident visited in 1999. Overall, we can clearly see from the lin...
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...steadily in1979 and it boomed till 1999.On the other hand in the bar graph, France...
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...and Turkey had the lowest UK visitors. On one hand, as we see in the line graph...
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...r 50 million abroad visits until 1999. On the other hand, it was readily apport...
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...0 million abroad visits until 1999. On the other hand, it was readily apportio...
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.... On the other hand, it was readily apportion in the bar graph that France was the hi...
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... end with less than 5 million visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62352941176 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16978304849 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.2304976084 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.5 112.824112599 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380251717638 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.265098185285 0.103423049105 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157956938688 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265098185285 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157956938688 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.2329268293 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.23 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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