Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
A large number of offenders commit more crimes as soon as they leave prison, this might be happening as an act of revenge or past traumas; however this act of violence has a huge negative impact on society. This essay will examine the causes of reoffending and the consequences of it.
In my opinion, the foremost cause of committing further crimes after being released is taking revenge, most of criminals develop a deep incorrect moral behavior during their imprisonment period, which definitely strengthen their intentions towards the person or even the organization that caused them to be imprisoned; therefore the criminal owe them a revenge as soon as he is out, on the other hand, some criminals get imprisoned due to a previous tragic event in their life, and as a result of lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison, they get out more vulgar.
Switching attention to society, the tremendous amount of crimes that will be resulted will actually cause so much chaos, Which may escalates to murdering, no doubt this would lead to an endless cycle of violence and reoffending, for example the well-known serial killer “Al-Tourbini”, Who killed over 32 victim; moreover, the Texas chainsaw massacre who killed a huge number of people and never been found. Taking law in consideration, there must be strict actions taken against any kind of violence in order to prevent the society from falling apart, and to implement solutions for prisoners to help them have a better chance, hence, the structured support and therapy will help them so much.
To counter this issue, Violating intrusive thoughts including taking revenge and tragic events are what pushes prisoners to commit further crimes. Consequently, this would negatively affect the society and increase the crime rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of offenders commit more crimes as soon as...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the criminals') or simply say ''most criminals''.
Suggestion: most of the criminals; most criminals
...after being released is taking revenge, most of criminals develop a deep incorrect moral behavior...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'victim' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'victims'.
Suggestion: victims
...iller “Al-Tourbini”, Who killed over 32 victim; moreover, the Texas chainsaw massacre ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, kind of, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81438465722 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.063717528 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.285714286 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.4285714286 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.2857142857 7.06120827912 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324070995859 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147276328922 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435632486024 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19308983858 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614472071505 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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