For owning a house or renting a house, to me. I like owning a house.
Because I think owning a house is much better because it's my home, I can do what I like. Owning a house and everything in it is mine and I can do whatever I want with it . In my view owning a house is great. Because owming a house will be more valuable because the money you make and buy it. When you rent a house you will just be like a person staying in someone else's house and you are not allowed to do what you want, you can only pay and stay there. When renting a house, the tenants themselves must comply with all that the landlord asks, but cannot do what they want. If I don't follow the instructions of the landlord, they can kick me out, and if I don't pay on time, they can also kick me out of their rental house. It's like being forced.
For example, when we own a house, we can easily fix things that make us unhappy, or upgrade things we want for our own home. When we own a house, it's all ours, later, if we don't want to live there anymore, we can use the house to transfer and sell. Not only that, having a house can help family bond more because when we have a house we can easily live with our family, but if we live in a rented house, it's very difficult because often the houses are closed. Small rented houses are not safe enough for families to live together. Owning a home is part of our benefits in life.
In conclusion, I would rather own a house than rent a house. But I think owning ăn house that is not easy. But owning a house is a wonderful thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ine and I can do whatever I want with it . In my view owning a house is great. Bec...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sks, but cannot do what they want. If I dont follow the instructions of the landlord...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...andlord, they can kick me out, and if I dont pay on time, they can also kick me out ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...own a house, its all ours, later, if we dont want to live there anymore, we can use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.00338983051 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04082857731 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467796610169 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8127306268 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8125 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474289011792 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219626671354 0.084324248473 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134115448469 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407119255802 0.151304729494 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130571822189 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.92 12.4159519038 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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