Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
-why you want to work there
-what skills and work experience you have
-inquire about details, such as salary, benefits, and hours
Hello Jasmin,
I am doing very well. I hope this letter would find you well. I am planning to immigrant to Canada for the purpose of getting a lucrative job. I have finished my higher education here and now I am looking for a employment. Although i can pursue a profession here In India as i have skills and abilities. However, i prefer to move abroad for getting better employment opportunities as i can explore a new place as well as can get experience of working in another nation. It would result in enhancing horizons of my knowledge and work experience.
I have completed my masters degree in Business that is a big sector. Besides this, i have 1 years of experience as a Human resource Manager. So, i would like to continue work in this field with more advanced technology as in this competitive era only those can survive who are adaptable and experienced. I am confident that my knowledge and experience would assist me in finding a salaried job in a foreign country.
I would like to ask about the career opportunities in the country you are living. As well as please send me the salary they offer with other fringe benefits. I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Yours faithfully,
Sarbjeet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Jasmin, I am doing very well. I hope this letter...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I hope this letter would find you well. I am planning to immigrant to Canada for ...
^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the purpose of getting a lucrative job. I have finished my higher education here ...
^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...education here and now I am looking for a employment. Although i can pursue a pro...
^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I am looking for a employment. Although i can pursue a profession here In India a...
^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s i have skills and abilities. However, i prefer to move abroad for getting bette...
^
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ting better employment opportunities as i can explore a new place as well as can ...
^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rience as a Human resource Manager. So, i would like to continue work in this fie...
^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...hnology as in this competitive era only those can survive who are adaptable and experienc...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...I am looking forward to hearing from you . Yours faithfully, Sarbjeet kaur
^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u . Yours faithfully, Sarbjeet kaur
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6712962963 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82947057137 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5640016365 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205258691867 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665448023777 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657108946748 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126347150206 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532690099828 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.