Some people think that it is best to encourage children to leave their family home as soon as possible. Others believe children should stay at the family home for as long as they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
This is a fact that children can become successful with the parental support as well as their own hard work. Many argue that pupils must be motivated to move to far from family members. However, others argue that children should decide whether they want to shift anywhere else or live at home with their parents. While i believe that family contributes at large in the fortune of their offsprings, there are some traits that a child can learn when they live alone.
On the one hand, staying at home with caretakers brings a lot of benefits for younger ones. Firstly, in today’s contemporary era, youngsters feel stress because of various responsibilities such aa academic, social and many more as they compete with peers to dominate themselves. Therefore, in teenage they are able to secure a job that can provide them finance for paying tuition fees and other overhead expenses. They rely on guardians for the funds to continue their studies. Secondly, everyone needs emotional support whenever they encounter any problem in their life as sometimes children have any difficulty that they can share with their parents and grandparents. Senior citizens have huge experience of life and they know how to handle a tough situation in life. Hence, assisting children in any stressful situation leads to their holistic development as well as prosperity. Finally, if children would take advice from their caretakers, they are more likely to take right decisions in their lives as they do not have excellent decision making skills like their parents. So, they can take guidance of their guardians.
On the other hand, i firmly believe that young ones can build significant skills and life lessons when they live off their home. First of all, in this competitive era only those children can be successful who are independent and confident. By living outside they may become well- behaved and responsible as they will be dealing with problems on their own and find best solution for eliminating those issues. As a result, they will learn problem solving skills. Whereas, when they depend upon family for money and other things they do not realize the value as long as they are not earning. Besides this, for being successful children needs traits like great hard work, skills, independency as employers choose those applicants who are all rounded in these days. However, relying on parents would make them dependent and lazy.
To conclude, Although i believe that parents support their kids in many ways and nurture them in a proper way to make them responsible persons in the society, there are some things that children can experience when they live far from family.
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besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0407239819 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53032224444 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536199095023 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.407711819 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.095238095 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0476190476 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29084573247 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915980088505 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537652442811 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190104210715 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595164324239 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.