The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums.
The chart displays data concerning the number of visitors to the museums in London over a six-month period, from June to December. Overall, it is readily apparent that the British museum is visited by the vast majority of visitors in August and while the figure for History Museum shows a slight downward trend over the period, there is a negligible change in the number of National Museum visitors.
In June, the History, British and Science Museum had a relatively similar figure with above 400,000 while the lowest belonged to the National Museum with only about 200,000. The figure of the History Museum underwent 2 months of stability before surging to more than 600,000 in August, after that, it plummeted and hit a low of roughly 280,000 in December. The similar pattern occurred in the British Museum with a peak at more than 700,000 in July, however, the number declined significantly by 220,000 to the end of the period.
With regards to the Science Museum, the number of visitors here plateaued in two months and then abruptly rose to 500,000 in September but finally fell to its nadir of 300,000 at the end of the year.
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- More and more fathers stay at home to take care of their children What are the causes of it Is this a positive or negative development 73
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Some countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors in major sports competitions such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup Others say it is better to spend money encouraging children to take up sports at a young age To what extent do you agre 84
- Many companies invest their money in sports games for advertisement purposes Some people think it is good for the sports world while others believe that it has some disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home leisure and work activities To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85641025641 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45136787748 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54358974359 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6319855667 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.833333333 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252889006635 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141716659735 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961827082594 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18743409831 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119528041034 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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