The letter to myself in the days with negative emotions.
Dear Griselda
Are you feeling stuck? Tired of the present? Are you lost and don't know what you need to do for yourself? Stop those thoughts my little girl, what you need to do is let go of everything, close your eyes and feel yourself, to know how strong you are. The past time you have worked very hard, it's great, don't set your expectations too high and push yourself to follow it. You have a family, your parents are always waiting for you, just when you turn your head, you will see your parents right behind you, following your every step. Don't hurt yourself because of someone's words, be clear in your own way, be who you are. Don't follow the crowd, don't change yourself because of a meaningless word. Your life, you should hold the pen yourself, don't let anyone else put the pen to write on your life. If you're too tired, reward yourself with a vacation, because you deserve it. Love yourself and take good care of yourself.
My dear girl
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... Tired of the present? Are you lost and dont know what you need to do for yourself? ...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...urself, to know how strong you are. The past time you have worked very hard, its great, d...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e you have worked very hard, its great, dont set your expectations too high and push...
^^^^
Line 2, column 532, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... behind you, following your every step. Dont hurt yourself because of someones words...
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Line 2, column 620, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... clear in your own way, be who you are. Dont follow the crowd, dont change yourself ...
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Line 2, column 643, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... be who you are. Dont follow the crowd, dont change yourself because of a meaningles...
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Line 2, column 740, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...life, you should hold the pen yourself, dont let anyone else put the pen to write on...
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Line 2, column 799, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...e put the pen to write on your life. If youre too tired, reward yourself with a vacat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42285714286 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05634905319 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6408507486 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00902446881297 0.215688989381 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.005546603884 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183960039439 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00911259168147 0.15604864568 6% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.86 8.06136585366 73% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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