in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case?
Nowadays, Owning the houses is essential for the urban people who live in the cities compared to the resident who rent the home. There are benefits for folk who buy a house for the long term.
On the one hand. There is a general belief that owning a house give a positive impact on several aspects. Firstly, having a home or apartment is the freedom to decorate the room by their style. For example, based on my parent's experienced, they were convinced to change the living room to be a vintage style. The permit is unrequired to transform a house. Secondly, the own houses can be a high investment in the future because the price of houses increases gradually year by year. As a result, owning a house is the best choice for living in the cities.
On the other hand, the number of urban cities decided to rent the house or apartment although, the negative effect of this circumstance. a huge living cost is required by the renter which is paying for the houses. it is dangerous for them to have dept on the bank. Hence, on this condition, the majority of homeless will rise significantly in the city. To illustrate, according to some experts, at the present time, the majority of people in this world are difficult to have places for living because of the expensive price then they choose to rent an apartment.
To conclude, it is clear that owning a house is a better impact on some aspects such as diminishing the opportunity to dept on the bank.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58396946565 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55576178529 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515267175573 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8459255429 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226189978277 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725644083449 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414252150549 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131840931708 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036211423902 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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