“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Several people see that zoos are severe places and they should be closed. Other people consider zoos are safe areas for animals. Zoos are protection zones for distinctive animals. This essay will discuss the two points of views. Firstly, people who believe that wildlife park is harsh for animals. Secondly, persons who think that zoological garden is an animal sanctuary.
First of all, some people have thoughts and they suppose that zoos are harmful region for animals because they are living creatures and we don’t have to hold them in cages. These people prefer keeping animals in the wilderness areas instead of keeping them in crates. Using animals in investment is unacceptable. For example, some people use animals for showing performances in circuses. This is considered an inhumane action.
On the other hand, kind of people have distinct ideas for this matter. They are supporters of zoos projects because there are unparalleled animals in the world. They are unique animals in the whole world. If they die, we cannot find them again. These animals will become extinct. To exemplify, Asian elephant is considered one of the most endangered animal in the world. It lives in India, and this kind of elephants became jeopardized because people their kill them to use its ivory, meat, and leathers.
To sum up, peoples’ thoughts are different from each other’s. there are two ways of thinking, the first one is against the zoo and animals torture. The second one is with the zoo’s idea to save animals. In my opinion, those are very attractive places. Furthermore, menageries are beneficial areas for protecting unique animals, which are at risk of dying, from people’s danger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15467625899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51524259636 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6319453864 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3043478261 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0869565217 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258810959569 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753293471763 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466437423168 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164380716599 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510058047104 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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