Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, company and society. Discuss and give opinions.
Nowadays, it is supposed that distinct individuals had better work for the same company while others believe that work for a variety of companies would facilitate themselves, institution and society due to its benefits brought back to our life.
On the one hand, there are some certainly indispensable merits of longing for a one-company career. Firstly, the employees working for the same company would get a handsome salary due to their devotion to the better company’s outputs. Being equipped with a professional skill set could facilitate them to be prospective personnel for the company. Therefore, they could reach a breakthrough of high salary with their employers when they are outmaneuver than the others. Moreover, the financial burden will no longer exist as people have better quality of life and welfare’s stability.
On the other hand, others assert that experiencing different occupations would bring back more advantages for themselves and the society. Firstly, people could improve self-enhancement when working for a variety of companies in different positions. Deliberately changing jobs would make people have a wide-range of diverse skills in many aspects, back tracking them to develop their talents and goals. Moreover, they can alleviate the pressure they are under as they do not care much about a hectic work environment but live life to the fullest and strive strongly for their own ambitions. For instance, more and more young people nowadays are ready to give up the work to pursue their dreams for enjoyment and experience.
To sum up, from my perspective, i believe that changing jobs would outweigh longing for a long-term job with its contributions to our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outmaneuvered'.
Suggestion: outmaneuvered
...lary with their employers when they are outmaneuver than the others. Moreover, the financia...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ience. To sum up, from my perspective, i believe that changing jobs would outwei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31111111111 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92157200671 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3152131086 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2617869414 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949305244021 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391586128423 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150713874961 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557739746357 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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