governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students

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governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.

The topic mentioned here discusses that government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students. I mostly agree with the opinion for two reasons.
Firstly, the fundamental reason behind my opinion is most of the students from underdeveloped countries can not afford the high cost of college and university education. For example, the poor students from third world countries have to quit their education as their family cannot bear the cost of their education. For this reason, unemployment rate increases. If the cost of higher studies become free they would be able to get their desired jobs.
Secondly, I hold my opinion for another reason which is, if the education becomes free of charge international students, who have the merit to play a vital role in the development of the country, would become motivated to pursue their higher studies in a specific country. Thus it will play a major role in the development of the country because a country with many meritorious people can achieve success faster.
Though these two reasons give ample room behind agreeing on the topic , the opposite can be helpful for some cases. If higher education becomes free for all then the profit from the education would be low. So, government can not modernized the education system. Their would be shortage of fund for research work that can impede the development of a country.
In conclusion it can be depicted that college and university education should be free for the students who are not financially sound. So, the profit from the rest of the students can be used for the modernization of the education system.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...agree with the opinion for two reasons. Firstly, the fundamental reason behind m...
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...is reason, unemployment rate increases. If the cost of higher studies become free ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'modernize'
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...on would be low. So, government can not modernized the education system. Their would be sh...
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... work that can impede the development of a country. In conclusion it can be dep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thus, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04029304029 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69678395891 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498168498168 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2911527467 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30648546405 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12249773633 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164407979998 0.0758088955206 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210482886817 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146265595974 0.0667264976115 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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