In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside.
This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?
Recently, many countries have remarkably developed the economy. Consequently, the living standards of urban area is much higher than in the past, but those who live in the countryside still have to confront many difficulties. In my view, I concur that the governments should take immediately measures to solve these problems before the situation becomes worse.
Firstly, the economic developments will lead to a change in population stucture. As big citites are renovated and modernized significantly, many countryside residents aim to city with better job opportunities compared to their hometown. Therefore, create a wave of migration and the housing crisis in big cities, leads to many other kinds of crisis such as enrvironmental pollution, etc. The best illustration for this is half of the world population are lived in the Valeriepieris circle with the diameter of about 4000km - which includes many big cities in China and active cities in Japan. Secondly, this also recreates the occupation structure. Because many people are moving to rural areas, the countryside economy are in a shortage of personnel, and many businesses are about to close. For instance, many attractive policy are developed to attract more people working in remote area to enlighten these land, but this number can only be counted by fingers. This is serious since many traditional village is nearly disappeared, losing the cultural identities of the country.
So what is the solution for this issue? First of all, the governments should develop countryside infrastructures, therefore gradually improve the file there so that people feel worth living. Furthermore, they should limit the differences between the standards of living in urban areas and in the countryside, expand the countryside into town and cities and install the amenities for residents here.
To reiterate, I admit that rapid economic developments not only positively affect the country but also have some negative influences. So the govenrments should solve these problems in order to support countryside improvements and make the country more powerful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47852760736 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04698897499 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.814379048 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313593850451 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960129822537 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646601478238 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197734635889 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565415621112 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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