The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
In the last decade, western countries have seen a climb in the number of children who are overweight. Furthermore, it has risen by 20 per cent. This essay will describe the possible effects of the problem and then discuss the main reasons of this epidemic.
Being an overweight child, may have several negative effects on their life. Firstly, they may be bullied despite the fact that they appear different from the other youngsters. Secondly, they are more likely to develop health problems like high blood pressure, diabetes, cardiac trouble, insulin resistance and risk of suffering from cardiovascular. Although, being obese may force the heart to work harder, this could result an apoplexy. So, it might have impacts on their social life and the health. However, obese child have considerably higher risk of becoming an obese adult.
It is perspicuous that overweight children have various negative implications on their live. There are a lot of reasons which made children overweight. To begin with, in most families now both parents work and due to their busy schedules, they rarely had handmade food at home or cook. As a result, many young people grown up in love with junk food. Although, many children nowadays rely on fast food or pre-prepared meals which contain too much salt, fats and soybeans.
To conclude, in reality, overweight children are a serious public health problem in Western societies. However, if parents, teachers and the government make a concerted effort this problem can be tackled effectively also it can be finally commented that consuming unhealthy diets like Fast food and pre-prepared meals are detrimental to the body's system. So, we should make it a duty to be conscious with what the growing child eats and homemade food from natural resources will be of great help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11073825503 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65431150733 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6430398795 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145414409257 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532440116244 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574802748951 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107680670235 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833653880306 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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