Topic: Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinion is divided as to whether or not the authorities should inhibit animal tests for medical research. Despite some valid arguments for this, I believe that humans should continue to use animals for the development of new drugs until the appearance of alternative methods.
On the one hand, many people believe that experimenting on animals is such a cruel action. A myriad types of medical products developed each year means that the life of thousands of animals are put at high risk or even become death. Exponents of banning animal tests believe that they have the right to live in harmony with human beings instead of being the subject of people’s experiment. They believe that people need to take into consideration that the lives of animal kinds should be respected.
On the other hand, supporters of animal experiments believe that testing on animals for medical research and other products is possible until the replacements are available. Animal trials enable researchers to test an appropriate dose of medication that people can obtain and ensure about human’s safety and survival. It is true that humans evolved from animals. It means that there will be many similarities so that animal tests bring a great source of efficiency to the development of drugs.
In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that animal tests for the development of drugs are justifiable until the advent of alternative approaches. The question is left for the scientists to find new ways of medical testing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Opinion is divided as to whether or not the authorities should inhibit animal t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13414634146 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75675999905 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8846018265 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322316512313 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120525735094 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676854472852 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191734408282 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679342761807 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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