In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
For some nations owning a home counts more than renting and there could be many reasons for their preference towards having their own home. I believe the primary reason for people to take this way is that becoming a homeowner changes how a person’s financial status is evaluated by others and gives the person a sense of settled and satisfying life. However, this should be viewed as a negative situation for homeowners since they may become less happy as a result of the financial pressure that comes along with building their own homes. Besides, it may lead to unorganized settlement and environmental degradation in the society if everyone thinks to have their own home.
To commence with, people often have the habit of comparing their status with others and have a desire to rise above them. With this, they think that having their own home might upgrade their status and get more respect than before. For instance, in Nepal, most people are now investing their earned money in constructing their own homes. Research has shown that more than 30% of the money that comes from remittance is invested in the construction of homes and construction businesses have shown a rapid rise in the past few years too. Also, for many parents, it is not desirable to get their daughter married to a boy who does not possess his own home. Besides, rent is expensive and people find it relevant to save money and build their own home. So, in many ways, people find it relevant in having their own home rather than staying in rent.
However, the situation of having own home may bear many negative consequences outweighing a few positive benefits it may have to people's life. The fear of being left out by society a person feel pressure to have his own home despite the financial problem he has. He is ought to construct or buy a home either using his lifetime saving or taking loans from the bank. This creates a burden to him and his family which in no sense gives any happiness to him or to his family. It might be possible that they may not be able to pay the loan on time and eventually lose the property they have. Similarly, if everyone opts for having their own home then it may lead to unplanned urbanization, destruction of more agricultural lands, and degradation of the environment. Likewise, the country cannot advance towards in its economy if the money is invested in such sector rather in some other important business areas. As mentioned earlier, more investment in construction homes is considered one of the reasons for the trivial economic growth of Nepal.
In short, the desire of having high status and settled life are the reasons for people having their own home. Nevertheless, if owns financial considerations are not taken into consideration then this might result in an unsatisfied and unhappy life for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... a few positive benefits it may have to peoples life. The fear of being left out by soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, for instance, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78936605317 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58428619447 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476482617587 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9741188966 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.523809524 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303547488299 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103955005079 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543522578483 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209760821233 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360519287299 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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