Write about the following topic. Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, accommodation is an essential need for everyone all over the earth. Some people believe that a long-lasting house is should be manufactured more, while some others think that producing a fast and economical house is the better choice
On the one hand, proponents of providing low-cost housing or rapid-fire housing point out that such buildings should not be a burden on every member of society who is being directly impacted by major events such as unemployment or economic turmoil. The cost of living in many urban areas has indeed been very high over the past few decades and most people would be more comfortable if they could pay off their loans to buy a house or apartment that is affordable. affordable. For these people, it is better to own a reasonably priced home than to be homeless.
On the other hand, I believe such important properties should be built to last as long as possible, maybe even real savings plan in the long run. Proponents of this view emphasize that buying cheap accommodation can later be very costly due to the low quality of construction as well as the high probability of purchasing another similar building. When the house is designed by more reputable architects and made with more expensive materials, it will certainly be safer and more durable as well as have a higher aesthetic appearance.
In conclusion, each type of accommodation has its benefits and is suitable for different people. I believe that the government can rely on these advantages to solve problems about housing for the whole people.
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...nd economical house is the better choice On the one hand, proponents of providing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95038167939 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8277394446 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.6393496566 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.111111111 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336150813899 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112945637392 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896740963645 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193662633051 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697517546593 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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