Some people think that if a country is already rich, any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizen happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many nations are already affluent and wealthy, however, they do not stop to go grow more in terms of economic status due to more thirst of luxurious standards of living. Some people feel that these countries should stop at acquiring wealth as their citizens won't get happier while others say that they have a contradictory opinion.
In the view of rapidly changing in technology and society , I concur that country has resources at their disposal and they should not refrain from acquiring richness.
On the one side, in order to enforce a superpower status and establish a domain all over the world, countries are in a rat race to stabilize their gross domestic product. In doing so, they fail to acknowledge the grievances and plight of the general public. According to a recent survey, almost 40% of the population in developed nations are below poverty line and 70% among them are homeless. Therefore, once a country is financially stable they should divert their attention towards the well-being and progress of their citizens.
On the other side, due to the boom of technology and advanced methods of research, any country can work it's way towards becoming a number one position in terms of financial status. Countries who were earlier considered under-developed and poor are now taking waves in the field of science and development and putting themselves on the world map along with ensuring the better standards of living for their citizens. For example, Organic Farming in India have provided a major contribution in the income of country's economy, and hence, government Indian leaders are constantly trying to improve their services by exporting the rice, wheat, and many other eatable items to other countries. Not only it has improve the popularity among across the world, but also providing a constant support of financial gains to the country's economy growth as well as maintaining a higher rate of gross domestic product.
To conclude, the concept of rich country is exaggerated, for once they stop striving for richness they will be immediately replaced. Additionally, I personally believe that if a nation gets financially stronger, it's citizens can benefit as the national leaders would be able to provide a higher and luxurious standards of living such as education, healthcare, and other essential facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pidly changing in technology and society , I concur that country has resources at ...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...wledge the grievances and plight of the general public. According to a recent survey, almost 4...
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Line 6, column 705, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ems to other countries. Not only it has improve the popularity among across the world, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18157894737 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80299723356 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581578947368 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2060462406 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.461538462 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135461376754 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471882465789 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405743898499 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755775327235 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487110774352 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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