Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
people have different views about whether old age in nowadays world is a negative or positive thing. although there are good arguments in favour of the effect of the increase of age being better, I personally believe that it is worse to become older.
On the one hand, there are number of reasons why some suppose that getting old is much easier for people to live in modern society. First of all, aging groups can cope with their problems more unchallenging than younger ones. This is due to their abundant experiences and skills received through their life span, therefore, they can look at the issues in various viewpoints and come up with the best solution for it. Additionally, people who at old age will have more time to enjoy numerous aspects of life, because they do not have to face as large a number of troubles as people who at the lower age, moreover, the government is constructing more and more facilities and equipment for the older at present. Accordingly, they will explore many other world characteristic and will live life to the full.
On the other hand, I would argue that getting old is a negative thing. Firstly, old age may cause unavoidable physical difficulties for humans. For the reason that human’s body will get more languish under time’s impact, more specific, bones and joints will be weakened and become fragilely, immune system will experience the stagnation and being debilitated. As a result, the elderly not only suffer more illnesses, especially osteoarthritis or hearing, vision loss,… but also take more time to recover from it than the younger. For instance, recent surveys in various countries showed that the percentage of sickness in the 65 and over age group is much higher than that of the lower age blanket. Secondly, elder people now are not able to keep up with the youth’s mindset, because they do not spend much time on social network, moreover, it is not easy for them to open their mind and accept to change their opinion formed in their world-view for a long time period. Consequently, it will lead to a huge generation gap between them and the next generations, and it become more difficult for human beings to understand others.
In conclusion, although aging brings both cons and pros in the modern world, it seems to me that there are more drawbacks.
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- Some people think that getting old is a negative thing whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that getting old is a negative thing whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that getting old is a negative thing whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87153652393 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62025278801 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549118387909 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4743376361 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.933333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4666666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200957631962 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803576264395 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888189484189 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118741401629 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385801226745 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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