If your local govt got donation from anonymous donor and wants to invest it in building a public facility, which one would you recommend? A public park, a public pool or a public library?
It is great idea to invest the donation to build public facility. If I were to choose between the construction of public pools, public parks and public library, I would certainly go with the public library. I think so because of two specific reasons which I will explore in following passages.
To begin with, public library provides open access to books and other reading materials to public. People can read their favorite books, magazines, comics, etc. at any time and in free of cost. This will help people save money and time. My personal experience serves to be a compelling example for this. When I was writing thesis for my graduation, I needed access to so many reading materials. Since my community didn’t have its own library, I had to reach central library which was far from my residence. I had a hard time travelling to central library time and often and I was enervated. It would have been a lot easier if there were any public libraries near me.
Second, construction of public library will benefit and encourage writers of the community as it provides platform to showcase their writings and creations. Drawing from my experience, I had a friend who was a very good writer. Despite his fine creations, he was not able to find audience to read his articles and provide him feedbacks. There are many such artists whose creations were reaching the audience. In such case, a public library will be a platform to such writers to showcase their work. As many people from the community visit the library, they would get to read those articles which benefit both the readers and writers.
In light of two reasons mentioned above, I am in strong support of utilization of the donation for construction of public library.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80602006689 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60526315641 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.501779197 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6315789474 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297327949427 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910881706643 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113419635474 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206976908263 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118459423763 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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