Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
When the more ultra-modern technology is, the more convenient it brings through more and more people searching for news on the internet. However, I strongly hold the view that the critical position of magazines will not be changed.
It is evident that the variety of knowledge brought from the internet is more attractive to people due to its convenience and simplicity. It takes some minutes to search for a topic that people are interested in and there are plenty of sources of output data to serve their study, work...In addition, everyone can quickly update the news as well as have flexible time to surf information. Besides this benefit, the biggest advantage of this service is that we always put ourselves in two minds about the exact of this information.
On the contrary, the amount of knowledge was supplied by newspapers or journals that have high accuracy due to the fact all the articles are verified about the contents as well as formats by well-known branded manufacturers before publishing. For example, the tension of war between Russia and Ukraine reaches its peak, based on reliable information from magazines spite a mess of online knowledge. Apparently, reading the favorite newspaper with a cup of tea in hand on an everyday basis is an undeletable part of the routine of a number of people.
In conclusion, although plenty of advantages of ultra-modern internet supplies, reading the journals in daily routine does not only maintain qualified sources of information but also presents the beauty of cultures
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- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 84
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, however, if, so, well, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85425338901 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5454202295 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.111111111 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5555555556 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243146974844 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852253328531 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977764095127 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141329587832 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096180745117 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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