The diagram below shows the life cycle of frog. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below
The given diagram illustrates how a grown-up frog fully reaches its maturity from the eggs.
Overall, there are six primary stages shown in the process, starting with the floating eggs on the surface of the water to a mature frog.
At the first stage, a large number of eggs containing embryos are laid in the water, hatching into small tadpoles after a while. Gradually, the bigger tadpoles are, the longer the tail of tadpoles is. After that, the front legs of the frogs start to appear and the frogs begin to breathe by their lungs, they are ready to climb up onto the ground.
After living in a water environment for a while, the frogs evolve as a terrestrial. To adapt onto the ground, their tails are gradually minimized beforing completely disappearing, instead, their feet are more developed to become an adult frog. The Frog’s reproductive stage begins as the adults are ready to mate and produce eggs into the pond again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its maturity from the eggs. Overall, there are six primary stages shown in th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...surface of the water to a mature frog. At the first stage, a large number of eg...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... a mature frog. At the first stage, a large number of eggs containing embryos are laid in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82098765432 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44523151065 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9541316015 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964589424544 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444353251075 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316142542436 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634413529587 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016390465178 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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