Today, the life expectancy of people is much higher than before. Some people
think that older people should continue to be involved in the workforce. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
In world everyting need to fight to survive, they must be use the times to work for the achievements and die in happiness.
For our humans, we are trying to work hard every days to get money and save our family, no one want that they can be a loser. On their ages from 20 to 60 they have tried all of their best to survive with the life full of challenges and thorns to keep their family a good life and happiness . so there is no excuse for the for higher life expectancy could be involved to workforce , they need to relax and enjoy the short rest of their lives with their family.
Finally, higher life expectancy not impact a lot to the meaning of people that older could continue involved to workforce because after the age of 50 the human's body has started aging reduces their acumen and detail in their work so I would agree with the idea that the elderly should be given a break
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orld everyting need to fight to survive, they must be use the times to work for t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he achievements and die in happiness. For our humans, we are trying to work ha...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: WANT_THAT_I[6]
Message: Did you mean 'want them to'?
Suggestion: want them to
...o get money and save our family, no one want that they can be a loser. On their ages from 20 t...
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Suggestion: .
...p their family a good life and happiness . so there is no excuse for the for highe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...heir family a good life and happiness . so there is no excuse for the for higher l...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...xpectancy could be involved to workforce , they need to relax and enjoy the short ...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rest of their lives with their family. Finally, higher life expectancy not impa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24852071006 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12852644044 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.171773031 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.6 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171778973287 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881755747093 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855114881435 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117189310674 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922427615332 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 50.2224549098 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.