Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
write introduction.
Nowadays, humans think that museums, art galleries or any historical evidences are not necessary due to people can suff these information on the internet. I mostly disagree that some physical evidences in the past are dissapeared and this essay will discuss my opinion.
The first reason is that poeple who visit those places can have a most realistic look, they can see or even touch the artifacts of works. To instead of that be at home and learn from the internet, it is possible to go there and experience it firsthand. For instance, people just pay a little money to visit museums, art galleries,... they can have a better experience than surf on computer. This is the reason that why do i disagree with this opinion.
Other reason is that museums, art galleries are also places where have the symbols of a country. They have many relics that cistercian used in the past, these objects maybe a traditional monuments of a country. For example, "Trong Dong Dong Son" in Vietnam National Museum of Culture is a big symbol in Dong Son culture and it is also a particular image in Vietnam, this exhibit would be more meaningful than only see some pictures about this relics at home. This is also the other important reason that surf on computer is not so important as directly seen at the museums, art galleries,...
In conclusion, I disagree that museums, art galleries are not needed today and those places can help people have a realistic look and they also have many traditional monuments in each country.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...re not necessary due to people can suff these information on the internet. I mostly disagree that...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...le money to visit museums, art galleries,... they can have a better experience tha...
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Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...omputer. This is the reason that why do i disagree with this opinion. Other reas...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'monument'?
Suggestion: monument
...past, these objects maybe a traditional monuments of a country. For example, 'Trong ...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Dong
... of a country. For example, 'Trong Dong Dong Son' in Vietnam National Museum of...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ngful than only see some pictures about this relics at home. This is also the other ...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ectly seen at the museums, art galleries,... In conclusion, I disagree that museu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82061068702 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6611813643 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1471118549 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205752420434 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766943195912 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519432675514 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140756935097 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034438232813 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...re not necessary due to people can suff these information on the internet. I mostly disagree that...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...le money to visit museums, art galleries,... they can have a better experience tha...
^^
Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...omputer. This is the reason that why do i disagree with this opinion. Other reas...
^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'monument'?
Suggestion: monument
...past, these objects maybe a traditional monuments of a country. For example, 'Trong ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Dong
... of a country. For example, 'Trong Dong Dong Son' in Vietnam National Museum of...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ngful than only see some pictures about this relics at home. This is also the other ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ectly seen at the museums, art galleries,... In conclusion, I disagree that museu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82061068702 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6611813643 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1471118549 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205752420434 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766943195912 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519432675514 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140756935097 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034438232813 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.