In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, University, or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Among the many decisions adults make, moving out is one, and it is not an easy one. Many decide not to instead, and this brings about advantages that far outweigh the drawbacks.
The first drawback relates to the ability to attain independence. Although it seems irrelevant to whether or not the adult lives under the roof of their parents, the case seems to be otherwise in reality. Many adults continue to live the life of a pampered teenager, which is understandable as humans or animals do not change their behaviors if no interference is introduced. The problem becomes more complicated when the adult finds a life-long partner, who is unwilling to share their personal living space. The reasons can be as plausible as unmatching lifestyles, and it is a matter of time before the moving-out decision is made; otherwise, someone is sure to suffer.
However, there are advantages to living with one’s parents, such as in terms of finance. Since real estate prices have reached their peak and will continue to rise as long as the world’s population keeps expanding, owning a home is no longer practical. Sharing accommodation is worth considering, but it is not all that different from living with the family either. Upon choosing so, the adult can also spend more time with their parents and help them in times of need. It is terrible to realize how little time there is to do so, and should they look to strengthen the family bond, living with them is much better.
In short, while not moving out may discourage independence and be troublesome should a person find a spouse, the decision can aid a person’s finances and help them reciprocate their parents’ care and affection. Measures can be discussed and taken appropriately to minimize the effects of these drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94019933555 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79519886955 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.373005732 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223009548539 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712171893905 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539485174428 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117827548224 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546175392099 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.