Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Environmental problem is a concerning issue in every society. Some people believe that we are losing different species of plant and animals and this is the main issue, while others state that there are bigger problems, and I personally agree with the first group.
First of all, it is clear that we are all struggling with great environmental problems such as, climate changing, decreasing the amount of underground water and global warming. It is now accepted that most of these problems are results of our life style, Hence, Numerous groups of people are trying to aware people of the consequences of these misbehaviors with the environment. Meanwhile, most governments all over the world are coming along with these positive activities by setting new rules in order to decrease damaging the earth.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that loss of particular species of plants and animals is also a great issue, because each of them has a vital role in the earth ecosystem. For example, imagine a situation in which a specific type of plant is lost, in this case an insect lost its main source of food, so it leads to the extinction of that species of insect and it continued through the whole food chain an affect the ecosystem of that area. Step by step during the time the vegetation starts to change, loss of trees increase the risk of flood, flood can wash the soil away, and after a few decades it makes massive effects on environment.
In conclusion, I would like to restate that, although there are convincing argument both for and against the importance of loosing particular species of plants and animals, my personal view is that it is the first and most important issue in environmental problems which leads to grater consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85953177258 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69251333891 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8309882559 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.444444444 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2222222222 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318223140589 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120861128359 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064509635875 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182275395483 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377345435259 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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