Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer - items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice
Considering my preference to prefer hand-made things or the ones fabricated by machines, I am strongly inclined to take the side of machine-made items. With respect to the accuracy, cost- efficiency and speed of production, the things produced by machines have immense priority compared with the items manipulated by hands. Being one of the most proliferated topics in the industrial revolution, the power of machines to automate mundane tasks is undeniable. The quality and precision of fabrication are the key elements that draw the public attention to machine-made items. Although, nobody can repudiate the value of things invented, designed and assembled without (the) machine interference, in modern age, there are other important factors that should be taken into account. To elaborate more on the subject mentioned, the following reason and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, items made by machines can be conducted in the way to control the sequence of fabrication process by the power of computer programming. As a result, these items can be produced in the shortest time with the cheapest cost. It goes without saying that hand-made thingshave come to fruition through repetitious trial and error applying high time consumption. Besides, the possibility of human error that leads/leading to the production of an undesired product is indisputable. For instance, there are some differences between two handmade clothes that can be observed obviously, but the recognition of the difference among machine-made things requires an accurate analysis. machine-made items can use/benfit from modern assembly machines and professional programmers to mastermind the products whose dimensional differences are really negligible. As a conclusion, the quality of things made by machines categorically outweighs the handmade items.
Another primary reason can be attributed to the rate of production. Regarding hand made fabrication process, human plays a critical role. It is crystal clear that the capability of all humans is confined to a few determined levels. Considering this issue, duringthe process of preparing things by hand, the exhaustion of human is indisputable which consequently brings/ bringing about some delays. Machines can operate incessantly that rarely need provisional suspension. Even for superpower humans, the velocity of machines is higher than theirs , because ultra-humans can invent the automatons which operate in higher rate than humans, even though they might not bring about innovations and think disruptively as humans. As a result, the slow rate of manipulating production process can be implied as one of the vital disadvantages of hand made things.
Aside from the points made above, when it comes to the things categorized as art products, the value of handmade items cannot be compared to the things made by machines. It is exceedingly accepted that art devices are evaluated based on the artists’ expertise and time expended to fabricate them. Needless to say, handmade furniture, carpets, trophies, etc. are much higher in value than those produced by machines in value. This can be indicated as the main disadvantage of machine-made items when it comes to art.
To recapitulate, the modern society can unquestionably prefer machine-made things with respect to the quality and speed of production. Although, consideringartistic things the value of these items cannot be compared to the machine-made ones, the modern life conducts the lifestyle in the way to prefer things with high quality in the shortest preparation time. In my opinion, the nature of human to prefer artificial things made by machines or natural things fabricated by hand is another factor that makes the judgement hard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Machine-made
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...nded to fabricate them. Needless to say, handmade furniture, carpets, trophies, e...
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...r factor that makes the judgement hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, really, regarding, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 41.998997996 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3180.0 1615.20841683 197% => OK
No of words: 575.0 315.596192385 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53043478261 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.115802437 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492173913043 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1019.7 506.74238477 201% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5390358347 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5357142857 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425036359482 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12282667791 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802998874264 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264477911208 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586355761051 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 78.4519038076 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Machine-made
... things requires an accurate analysis. machine-made items can use/benfit from modern assem...
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Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... machine-made items can use/benfit from modern assembly machines and professiona...
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Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...locity of machines is higher than theirs , because ultra-humans can invent the au...
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Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...machines is higher than theirs , because ultra-humans can invent the automatons w...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that art devices are evaluated based on the artists’ expertise and time expended...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nded to fabricate them. Needless to say, handmade furniture, carpets, trophies, e...
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Line 7, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etc. are much higher in value than those produced by machines in value. This can ...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...modern society can unquestionably prefer machine-made things with respect to the ...
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Line 9, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er artificial things made by machines or natural things fabricated by hand is ano...
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Line 9, column 530, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r factor that makes the judgement hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, really, regarding, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 41.998997996 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3180.0 1615.20841683 197% => OK
No of words: 575.0 315.596192385 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53043478261 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.115802437 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492173913043 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1019.7 506.74238477 201% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5390358347 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5357142857 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425036359482 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12282667791 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802998874264 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264477911208 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586355761051 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 78.4519038076 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.