Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Several people believed that the matter of citizen well-being is the responsibility of local authorities, whereas the others claimed that citizens should take care of their own health. In this essay, I will discuss the two viewpoints before giving my personal opinion on the issue.
On the one hand, the government has more power in promoting physical and mental health of its residents than they themselves do. To be more precise, the authorities can enact legislation for the native to follow in an effortless way while it is less feasible when it comes to the individuals. Take the Danish government as an example, after imposing a fat tax on the production of chocolate and other fatty products, residential demand for the intake of them has obviously decreased considering statistics in the past. Since then, the policy has led to a reduction in the occurrences of certain diseases such as obesity, heart attack and a host of other health hazards in which high calories intake act as a major cause.
On the other hand, it is apparent that a citizen can take charge of his health more thoroughly than the government does. For instance, when it suddenly dawns on somebody with an appetite for sweet food that he is too obese, he himself will seek ways to tackle with his condition. By going to the nutritionist for advice on diet, or enrolling in a gym for personal training, he is actually finding solutions for himself, and the fat tax on chocolate, which is imposed by the government for example, will facilitate him in doing so, owing to the fact that purchasing chocolate now requires a higher amount of money.
In conclusion, from my perspective, the problem with public health does not rest with either the people only or merely the administrator bodies, but it is the duty of them both. However, it is suggested that the government take first steps to organise more effective conferences to reach a consensus on this matter rather than passing the buck on the other/ pushing the responsibilities on the other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: opinion
...uss the two viewpoints before giving my personal opinion on the issue. On the one hand, the...
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...ng my personal opinion on the issue. On the one hand, the government has more...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effortless way" with adverb for "effortless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ct legislation for the native to follow in an effortless way while it is less feasible when it comes...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calories'' or 'calorie's', 'calory's'?
Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
...t of other health hazards in which high calories intake act as a major cause. On th...
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...alories intake act as a major cause. On the other hand, it is apparent that a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88985507246 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81618629924 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571014492754 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5930392117 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.363636364 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280219447072 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960020172572 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605250519905 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171803368245 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689599141934 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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