Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country ?
Discuss both views and give your own opinion ?
It is becoming increasingly popular that the youngsters are made to make a living and settle in a different country. There are both merits and drawbacks relating to the phenomenon. In my opinion, young people should be entitled to select their location of work.
On the one hand, working abroad open various opportunities for young generation. Working in more developed countries is a gateway for the less well-off stripping off their poverty. This is deeply rooted in the fact that salary in these nations tend to be higher than foreign employee’s homeland thus they are now able to earn lucrative income and enhance their living standard. An additional point is that individuals may find great chance of enrichment their knowledge. Given better education system, staff in foreign nations are able to progress to higher education and pursue academic achievement. Likewise, people can widen their horizon thanks to their exposure to foreign culture and lifestyle.
Conversely, people working overseas could be negatively impacted by racist discrimination and experience culture shock. While attempting working in another nation, people may be somehow feel alienated by the local people who preoccupied workplaces. The inadequate linguistics skills and lack of cultural awareness of newcomers could separate them from the local workforce. Furthermore, foreigners may find it difficult to adapt to their new habitat which sometimes is largely distinguished from their motherland in terms of cuisine, customs, traditions and so forth. One prime example is that westerners could deem some Vietnamese specialities as inedible as the ingredients could be scared to get in where they were born.
In the light of these facts, even though there are some pitfalls associated with settlement and working conditions in other countries. The trend has brought manifold benefits to the unprivileged. It would be better for them accepting the differences and strive for their future. However, the choice to where to live and work should definitely depend on these young minds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, so, thus, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43302180685 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87858895913 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1650492945 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190415620371 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596974656934 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056034846004 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12312976822 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294819496977 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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