These days people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or events do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent decades, popularity of sports has skyrocketed. Critics argue that expanding hard earned income on live matches is a wastage of funds however, I believe the opposite. This essay will discuss the benefits of using money on such tournaments before venturing a logical conclusion.
Due to the personal choice of the people, they prefer to go to watch such events in stadium rather than watching it on television. Satisfaction of an individual is something which cannot be compromised, as everyone wants to enjoy their favorite sports as audience. They always prefer to support their favorite team and players with their physical presence in the ground, which boost the confidence of the team. For instance, in football club matches, home team always has the advantages because their fans support them with full of energy. Which helps them to win the games in their home ground and also encourage the confidence of the sports person.
Another big reason of spending money on such occasion is that it helps in developing the infrastructure of that sport in the particular country. Although amount of ticket is too high for matches, but all these funds are used to develop and train the players for big sports events. To exemplify, the “Board of Control for Cricket in India” charges huge amount of money for game passes from the public, but all this income is used to provide better quality equipment and training to the players as a result Indian cricket team has established reputation across the world.
Summing up with all above statements, people are disbursing income with their own wish which ultimately provides benefits to sports team and its members who are working hard to win games for their nation. Thus, there is no harm of spending funds on such exhibitions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...nd also encourage the confidence of the sports person. Another big reason of spendi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03703703704 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60598230248 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4561319668 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141344889333 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522308253885 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444447173738 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081091716695 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038955397419 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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