In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more available. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that the restrictions of fast food ‘s consumption seem to be a sources of constant debate. While in some countries, this type of food incline to be more accessible and low-priced come with instantaneous merits. Nevertheless, I am convinced that its contribution to the economy and people’s lives is outweighed by the demerits in later life
Firstly on the personal level, the fast food directly impacts adversely to consumers’ health when contains low in fibre and high in fat within mounting of oil, hazardous food coloring agents, even LDL cholesterol, which takes the most responsibility of the cardiovascular diseases.in case of the packed foods, the scientists have pointed out that in these products contains a chemical called MSD used as its preservative and is cancerous substance .For that reasons, excessive consumption of them may increase the risk of hypertension, diabetes and obesity. Furthermore, it promotes the sedentary lifestyle among regular consumers, when made people tend to be lazy and less workout which could imperil their health.
On the social level, the affordability and availability of junk food coincide with the growth of health problem in community that would places a huge burden to the healthcare system. Besides that, the flourishing fast food might threaten the traditional one ‘s position by being expert in propagating and more in line with the young. As a result more and more traditional restaurants would be replaced by the junk food restaurant within the losing in the tradition of nation.
Thus above reason, I strongly believe that lowing the price in fast food can be an adverse action to not only person but also community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21532846715 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00699142709 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.95794428 49.4020404114 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.625 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153259885103 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708350023702 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313115847879 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091985554522 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403492791874 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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