The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?
Like heterosexuals, many lesbian, gay and bisexual people want to form stable, long-lasting relationships and many of them do. And there are many opposing opinions about same-sex marriage. One is protesting people, besides others said that it is completely normal trend and there is no one can not ban them do it because that is their right. I will show you some opinions for my agreement.
Being denied the right to marry that find it easier to lead to sex discrimination, social stress, and mental health problems. Especially, when they are stigma may undermine the healthy development of adolescents and young adults. Moreover, there are people who are depressed illness, can not control their actions and do anything to make pain themselves. For instant, they cut their wrist, worse become suicidal.
On the other hand, It is beneficial for all members of society to get married. Marriage bestows spirits of value and economic benefit. They will be open more to everyone, not only to receive positive energy from around but also to make friends, and get more opportunities.
Furthermore, society develops day by day, leading to humans having to change or discard some rules that are not suitable. All of us even preserve our customs but we have to know to accept changes to be suitable for current society.
In conclusion, people have the right to have gay marriage, we should not be denied them, should support them, and change some rules which are not suitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9918699187 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6970434235 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8722222134 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189993483748 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540773228944 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407805565011 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942061065074 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381251454143 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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