A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Introduction:
Indeed, the same national study curriculum included by the nation for every student in the school syllabus will result more options to explore for students to study; thus, leads to better decision making while applying for the college. But, since the mentioned curriculam is not having any information about the subjects inluded it is hard to decide.
If the national study curriculum has the little introductory syllabus of an every subject is there to study for professional college it will be advantageous for students to explore every possible option available to choose the professional subject for college.
while it will spend more time of the sudents in school, it will save time while studying in college as they will have some prior knowlege about the professional subjects in college.And, since its better to make mistake about choosing yout profession in early life than the later in the life it will will help students to avoid such mistakes in their peak years of college.
The same national curriculum will also increase a normalization of students to compare themselves with each other and a sense of comparison leads to competitive nature of students which will definetely increase their personal growth.
Hence, even if having the same national curriculum for study to the students will spend more time than having the customized curriculam it will definitely more space for improvement and more oportunities to explore to the student for their professional life. thus, it would be great to inlcude same national study curriculum until students enter college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... the professional subject for college. while it will spend more time of the sudents ...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ut the professional subjects in college.And, since its better to make mistake about...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: will
...arly life than the later in the life it will will help students to avoid such mistakes in...
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Line 6, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...he student for their professional life. thus, it would be great to inlcude same nati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76732180512 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486274509804 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6893868802 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.857142857 118.986275619 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4285714286 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222967473785 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131728041829 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748153995434 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147934706464 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546851178108 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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