Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?
As the world is rapidly growing, improvement can be seen in all aspects of life, people costant replace old values with new ones. There is some dispute whether art is necessary to humanity or not. In my opinion, even though the mertits of art is implicit, the role of it is more significant than ever.
Some people may claim that art wastes great amount of resources to maintain. It is especially true of paintings which could take a lot of effort and finance for preservation. Morever, they could occupy spacious room which could be deployed for other priorities. More importanty, the impacts of art on individual are likely to be invisible. Thus, it often sparks controversy when it comes to the significance of art in society.
However these thinking are flawed as art could itself generate more income if harnessed properly, and their effects on human being's mind are proved to be positive. In addition, there are many merits that art could offer to human's life. The first point of view is that art represents indigenous culture and history of certain people which guarantee diversity of people's identity on earth. To illustrate, ballet, which was originated from Western is one of the iconic symbol of Western dancing style, and could be regconizied almost any where in the world. An additional point is that art contains historical value of the societal context through out the history of mankind. For intance, a picture of a King handing a sword to a turtle is presentation of begin of a war in middle age in Viet Nam. Finally, even though the impacts of art on human's psychology is blurred. It has been proved by many researches that art gives people a sense of tranquillity. It is not uncommon that spectators of art say that they feel calm after watching paintings in exhibition.
In sum, the position of art in our life is undeniable, albeit there are no immediate and obvious benefits could be attained from it. I believe that art are of great importance to conserve our culture and relieve people of homogeneous lifestyle.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82571428571 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71302376679 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3852457271 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8947368421 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269561395569 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783848508527 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438192008768 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158556397642 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370830701312 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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