Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because they enjoy feeling comfortable and fear the unknown.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you either agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not be true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A society is often considered great by the effort they put into their development. Greatness comes in different ways; it could be in form of economic stability, political might, technological advancement or even in foreign trades. One thing that is evident in societies that are considered great such as America, United Kingdom, Indian, China and many other countries is their continuous quest for knowledge and believe that everything can get better. These countries continuously strive for innovation and constantly improve on previous knowledge without the fear of the unknown. Indeed, any society that is great or strives to be great should be progress oriented.
In our society today, we enjoy the benefits of many people’s curiosity for a better life. Such is evident in the development of airplane. The wright brothers observed the birds flying in the air and felt that human could also transport in that way. The brothers went into research and had to think innovatively to discover the airplane we have today. This was not something any other person had thought of nor something that anyone had previously done. Their ability to renounce their obsolete way of thinking paved the way for other forms of aircraft. Other people too came up and improved on what the wright brothers had created, coming up with Jets and other forms of aircraft. India also invested in their health sector; trained many of their people in health and research. Today they have one of the best health sector in the world.
China is an exemplar of a great society; they took over technological advancement from other countries. China ensured that in there is progressive thinking in every level of their education. Children in preschool are made to learn about robots and even create robots. They ensure that the younger generation are of sharp minds and ready to try new things. Today, china has achieved the feat of being the most technologically inclined country in the world making it one of the fastest growing economy. Their ability to renounce obsolete way of thinking has earned them that spot in the world.
Many might argue that once a society is great such societies should not have to bother about innovative thinking again as they have earned their spot. Nokia used the be the best phone company; popularly known for making phones with good batteries. Today they are no longer the best as they became comfortable with their products and never strived to be better. When one needs to get a good phone these days, apple and Samsung readily come to mind as they have constantly improved and are progress oriented. Such is also the case when it comes to a society, a great society that fears the unknown and becomes too comfortable would just realize one day that they are far behind.
Nothing good has come out of fear, it only holds a society down while others who are bold enough to face their fears thrive. Innovative way of thinking has given us so much of what we enjoy today as a society. Critical and progressive thinking should never stop as it has done so much good. We enjoy them in health, stable economy, technological innovation and many more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: Much might; A good deal of might
... earned them that spot in the world. Many might argue that once a society is great such...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...they have earned their spot. Nokia used the be the best phone company; popularly known...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2630.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90671641791 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5250140883 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486940298507 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 817.2 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1210578418 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6896551724 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4827586207 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.965517241379 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211621098057 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601991394302 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492143099786 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126482258176 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332662341003 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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