Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
As online shopping has become increasingly prevalent nowadays. While some people concern that this trend may cause certain issues to customers, I believe that the benefits from utilization of internet platforms would overshadow its drawbacks.
Undeniably, executing deals online provides people with convinience and affordable offerings. This stems from the fact that it is easier for consumers to make their purchase online. Traditionally, people have to spend time to visit conventional brick and mortar stores and manually opt for their favourite items. The buying process may take them more time to complete as opposed to online purchasing. More importantly, when searching for products online, buyers are able to compare the price, thereby allowing them to purchase the merchandise with the most reasonable price. Finally, as the offering available from internet platforms tend to vary from category, function, appearance and so forth thus gives internet buyers a wide range of options.
Apart from benefits, individuals buying through internet may become victims of crime, and experience health problems. Scam and other crimes are sprouting along with the polularity of internet for the time being. It is easy for internet users to lose their personal information or buying products with no redeeming features from unreliable sellers. Besides, people may encounter eye-related issues and other symptoms of sedetary lifestyle, if they are over-reliant on the internet to make purchases and become heavy users. Furthermore, buyers may not have the best buying experince when buying online. This is because they are unable to touch, smell and feel the goods.
In sum, even though there are disadvantages while buying from online sellers, the advantages from the trend are tremendous. I believe that this is an irreversable phenomenon and it will fourish together with the development of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As online shopping has become increasingly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52054794521 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79982876189 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4689403935 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162539722063 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546149415589 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320709556623 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999819501242 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141570966778 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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