Migrating to a new city or country is indeed a tricky thing to do. Personally, I believe that migration is beneficial for individuals. I thinks this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, typically, people won't lose their old friends by migration. You can still be in contact with your old friends even after migration. Due to the development of digital technology, today, we live in a gigantic city called Earth. People can easily contact with their friends living thousants of kilometers away. Therefore, individuals can live far away from their friends, but be in contact with them. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. Two years ago, a friend of mine decided to continue her education in a foreign country in Europe. Even though there is a large distance between us, our relationship has not been deteriorated. We still see each other on video calls once or twice a week, send messages, and even go out with each other when she visits her old city.
Secondly, people can build new relationships after migration. It's tough at the beginning, but you will gradually find new friends in the new environment. For instance, when I was 18 years old, I migrated to Tehran for my Bachelor's degree. After a few months, I managed to find some new friends with whom I currently have very close relationships. They are from diverse cultural backgrounds, so they have different attitudes, and I have learned lots of new things from them. I wouldn't be able to find friends from diverse cultures if I hadn't moved here.
Finally, migration can be pretty influential on the quality of your life. You will probably have more job opportunities in other cities, consequently, moving to these cities will provide you with better options compared to your current inhabitant. For example, I don't have lots of job opportunities in my country, but I have plenty of options in the United States, so moving there will probably lead to my professional progression; and therefore, the quality of my life will be improved. and although, as I mentioned at the beginning of this essay, migration is tough, it has several advantages that overcome its drawbacks.
In summary, I am of the opinion that migration is a good thing for people. I feel this way because, first, you will still keep your old friends. Second, you will find new friends, and third, you will have more job options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86737400531 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79911112906 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554376657825 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1162431959 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4090909091 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177255919762 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054739862983 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525615785677 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119573613736 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498193894133 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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