Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain young people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, the appearance of museums is considered to be an entertainment place for youth to enjoy. However, others perceive that museums are built with the aim of providing information and knowledge to visitors. From my perspective, I agree with the former idea that museums with more entertainment service will be good at educating young individuals and providing them with intriguing experiences.
On the one hand, museums are considered to be constructed with the purpose of entertaining people. Museum is a place that exhibits a collection of objections stemming from ancient period, and it will be more interesting with the emergence of cutting-edge stuffs for visitors to experience. With the support of technological devices, it will be easier for visitors to approach the ancient story and feel more intense about it. Take National Oceanographic museum of Vietnam as an example, thanks to equipping more entertainment service such as experiencing dining under the ocean glass, it has attracted more visitors compared to the past. Hence, not only do people can have fascinating experiences but they also can approach numerous stories and creatures in museum’s exhibition.
On the other hand, with the educational purpose, museums are considered to be responsible for that goal. There are numerous objects exhibit in the museum, which possess historical value, thus, people can absorb these information and get to know the former generation by visiting the museum. Which is a valuable knowledge source for youth to comprehend. For instance, War Remnants museum stores a multitude of things which come from ancient period. Therefore, visitors will have a chance to travel to the past and approach those historical value by visiting a museum.
In conclusion, museums are places which store a historical and artistic value to a society. On my view, a museum should be constructed with the purpose of not only educating youth but also giving them memorable moments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...storical value, thus, people can absorb these information and get to know the former generation b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30476190476 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99916172046 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1708693558 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283323864057 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108333608456 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637149385476 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197822719171 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351903437059 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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