Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?
Protecting this world's environment is the responsibility and duty of everyone including the government and maintaining your own health is a matter of awareness and how to take care of them, not the responsibility of the government. Some opinions claim that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. I myself do not completely agree with this view because protecting the environment is also everyone's responsibility not only the government. The essay below will tell more about my point of view objectively.
In the current era, pollution is one of the main causes of respiratory diseases and has a negative impact on the health of everyone. It is not natural that the environment is so polluted, partly due to the poor awareness of people, from small things such as littering or the factories in the suburbs and near the sea emitting emissions. Air and water sources cause serious environmental pollution. The government has taken measures to limit this, but most people's awareness is too low to continue to destroy this environment.
Honestly, for the protection of the environment and human housing problems, the government has only a part of the responsibility in this and people have the biggest responsibility in this. The government alone cannot do this and it takes help from everyone and if we want to prevent disease, each of us must have a sense of keeping the environment clean. Thus, I myself partly disagree and partly agree with the above opinion.
In conclusion, the maintenance of each person's health is by themselves, we can't blame the government. As for the protection of the living environment and housing-related matters, it is a common job for everyone, everyone has the responsibility to protect and preserve the environment. The people's job is to maintain the general hygiene of public places, and the government's job is to manage the sanitation teams and strengthen the management of the cleanliness of the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
Protecting this worlds environment is the responsibility and d...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... In conclusion, the maintenance of each persons health is by themselves, we cant blame ...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ach persons health is by themselves, we cant blame the government. As for the protec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, so, then, thus, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17878787879 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20847277075 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3606508277 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273878591715 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924885879054 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106443321616 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156892468477 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707775329028 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.