More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
People are becoming significantly concerned about their health these days. Regular exercise and healthy diets are more popular. There are two main causes behind the trend and governmental intervention could motivate the public to have good diets and take part in more exercise.
The prevalence of technology in all aspects of life and unhealthy food are the main reasons that encourage people to choose a better living way. First, the increasing use of technology is the main culprit of sedentary lifestyle which is attributable to a wide range of health issues. This includes the damage of people's reflexibility and back pains. In addition, fast foods which contains an excessive amount of fat and sugar could axacerbate the impacts on customers. Given better education and self-awareness, people nowadays thus opt to healthier diets and join in regular exercise to ameliorate these affects of modern lifestyle.
The authorities could encougrage healthy eating habits and physical activities by providing social programmes online and offline. The first measure is that videos about the drawbacks of inactivity and overconsumption of unhealthy dishes could be broadcast on social platforms to raise public awareness. Additional sport devices can be equipped at parks and recreational areas to supply citizens with places to play sports or physical recreational activities. Finally, law makers could imposed stricter legislations on manufacturers of fastfood and other unhealthy ingredients such as sugar and fat.
In sum, technological advancements and the popularity of fast food have detrimental effects on many individuals. To tackle this, the role of governmentis of great importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'impose'
Suggestion: impose
...l activities. Finally, law makers could imposed stricter legislations on manufacturers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, thus, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6171875 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09366122032 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0580415823 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23597308279 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073500830886 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079435655879 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119358142816 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732726248385 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.