Some people believe that university students should pay for their tuition fees because university education only benefits students themselves, not society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, it is believed that students attending university education have to fund their tuition fees for the reason that they benefit from it instead of societies they live in. Although this idea is reasonable to some extent, I would argue that those having free access to tertiary education.
On the one hand, university students should contribute to the cost of their education as they typically reap rewards from their degrees. In today’s knowledge-based society, having a bachelor’s degree would keep graduates in demand as the need for well- educated workers. This means that they can access to better job opportunities and people landing a employment right after leave secondary school could not compete. Moreover, formal qualifications are required in numerous well- paid jobs. Doctors and lawyers, for instanced, who in most countries are among the most wealthy, capitalize on their degree by receiving incomes often far above people without qualifications.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the government should fund student’s education for several reasons. Firstly, society benefits from educating their people, as the latter can contribute more providing vital services and innovations. This is because university graduates are more likely to start companies, employ people, invest in technologies and pay taxes which are essential for an economy to develop. Secondly, some of potential students comes from lower income families, and they might not able to continue post-secondary education if they were forced to pay for their tuitions. By offering free access to their education, governments can ensure that they can contribute to society in many ways, such as social work, community services, and working in the arts sector.
In conclusion, there may be some reasons to supporting students paying for their tuition fees as doing profit individually, I strongly belive that this policy is not without drawbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...er job opportunities and people landing a employment right after leave secondary ...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...to develop. Secondly, some of potential students comes from lower income families, and t...
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Line 5, column 767, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
... community services, and working in the arts sector. In conclusion, there may be so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44516129032 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86513361552 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0752251227 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34134710396 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113425631295 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853930458868 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21401645505 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368315486816 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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