in many countries, it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree and disagree?
Adverts beer, wine and spirit drinks are banned in many nations nowadays. This essay would agree with this statement because it leads to serious health problems and advertisers often persuade people to drink more than they should.
One of the primary reasons to make advertising alcohol illegal is that it is harmful to our health. Drinking too much alcohol causes several health conditions, including lung cancer and brain damage, and also makes people have to visit hospitals regularly. It also puts a tremendous strain on health services and their families, as it causes a lack of equipment in medical systems and hospital costs are often high. For example, Russia had seen a large number of alcoholics until they banned adverts for spirits on all advertising channels. As a result, they have seen a massive reduction in those addicted to alcohol and a significant decline in lethal diseases related to drinking alcohol.
Another reason why the promotion of alcohol should be prohibited is that advertising influences men and women to buy and use more of their products. The principal goal of advertising campaigns is to sway potential customers to get impressed by their products by making them look sexier or cooler, it could be seen irresponsibly when they just approach people to sell their products without telling them the fact of how dangerous they are. For instance, Henny adverts often portray attractive men and women in luxurious settings, drinking Vodka wine.
In conclusion, I believe that the promotion of spirits drinks should be banned because it causes many disadvantages in our lives like the negative effect on health conditions and contributes to the increase in the number of alcoholism in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ften high. For example, Russia had seen a large number of alcoholics until they banned adverts fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15302491103 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69316263163 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0897400519 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146935140719 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622380397565 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472940008415 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870427497068 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287569081601 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.