Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
With the enhancement of international trade, relationships with foreign countries have been strengthened. It is believed that globalization is fruitful as it has more merits than its demerits. I partially agree with this statement because its contrary sides cannot be ignored. This essay will scrutinize its benefits and drawbacks in the subsequent paragraphs before venturing to a logical conclusion.
Accumulation of foreign reserves on the one hand is a colossal positive trade as international transactions conducted only in American dollars. Development of infrastructure is also made possible due to the emergence of foreign direct investments in a country. For Example, the Delhi metro line which is set up by foreign direct investment received from Japan is India's first fastest local train network. Therefore, globalization is considered a virtue because it has brought a lot of changes to the economy.
However, interdependency on resources has risen with this setup of global markets. It not only ends the self-sufficiency of a nation but also allows some trade-oriented regions to overtake the international market. For instance, China supplies all major products at cheap rates to almost every country in order to suppress the local traders of those nations. As a result, most of the underdeveloped nations cannot boost their economy.
To encapsulate, despite the negatives of globalization, its positives have an edge over the former. If policies are made to restrict the drawbacks of eight, then it will be more fruitful than it is now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47520661157 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3142067315 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1628000493 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191261267142 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611291927808 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556290541455 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10413590899 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537653549642 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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