Some people think that advertising and children should be banned. To what extend to you agree or disagree.
Advertisement place a significant role in setting up new businesses as it makes public aware about the new products which are available in the markets. But few individuals have certain believes that it leave negative impact on teenagers therefore should be prohibited. I strongly agree with this statement and give some reasons in upcoming paragraphs to support my view.
Commencing with, most of the advertisements are made to provoke the viewers to buy their products. This companies target teenagers who have immature brains and get easily attractive towards the unhealthy snacks and drinks. As a result, they get addicted from these products which hampers the growth and development of mind as well as body. Apart from this, preservatives in these items are the major cause of early chronic disease such as diabetes cancer and many more. The report had been published by World Health Organisation which clearly depicts that the surge is observed in childhood disorders due to the spite foods.
Another major effect is, it increases the possibility of financial crisis in case of lower and middle class families. Teenagers are influenced by these promotions and pressurise their parents to purchase that product for them. For instance, buying iPhone, a product of Apple company, is the dream of every child. After watching it's advertisements young ones demand to buy it even though it is too much expensive. This affects the budget of the families.
In my opinion advertisement should be regulated by any government authority to protect the future of their country's youth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'places'.
Suggestion: places
Advertisement place a significant role in setting up new bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23622047244 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81652123471 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0460680306 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097658990988 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296593458538 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403466519324 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701615574482 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529412421225 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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