As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions for these problems?
Along with the global development, there are more and more big cities occurring in this day and age. Which results in the increasing number of issues that young generation can face when residenting in urban area. From my perspective, social evils is one of problems that the youth may get involved in and there are a myriad of solutions to deal with this pressing issue.
To begin with, along with the development of society, social evils might be associated with young individuals. As the growth of the city, there is a gap between wealthy people and who live in poverty, to adapt living standards in big cities, young people may associate with illegal activities , even committing the crime to earn money for surviving. For example, the rate of juvenile delinquents in big cities is mostly higher than that of in suburb area. Which leads to social evils such as murdering, pocketing to pay for living demands. Thus, it can have an adverse effect on the society and the safety of residents.
There are a myriad of solutions to deal with this problem. To tackle with the number of juvenile delinquents engage in social evils, government should subsidize for young individuals who have struggle with high-living cost, and facilitate for them to get a career and earn money by working. Besides that, the youth should be encouraged to engage in social activities to harmonize with the community and bring value to the society by attending voluntary activities, helping underprivileged people. Therefore, the number of juvenile delinquents could be reduced with the supportive help of people.
In conclusion, with the support and subsidy of government and community, the number of social issues that the youth might face can be mitigated considerably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le may associate with illegal activities , even committing the crime to earn money...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
... the safety of residents. There are a myriad of solutions to deal with this problem....
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Message: Use past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
...ubsidize for young individuals who have struggle with high-living cost, and facilitate f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0553633218 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77731810175 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508650519031 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9185029347 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164339959761 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628774174802 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565656761346 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929929011168 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578909937823 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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