Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Every thing we are using in our daily life in morning brushing with teeth sleeping in the softest matress is the development of science and technology. this two things has solution for every probelm in the world .
Walking with bare foot to flying in the jets with high speeds, leaving under the trees to leavinf in the highest building is due to the technology and science only. In 1700's man strictly unavailable talk with friends who are far away to them the only source is to communicate is telegrams and eltters but it takes day to reach the person and getting replies from the person takes almost 10 days if the weather does not support it may takes much longer also . But, now with the mobiles can easily to the person whom we want to send messages with in minutes this is the biggest problem faced by many families in the olden days but the technology finds the solution for it.
Not only in communication the technology helps us in moving one from place to other in minimal time as compared to in my parents child hood they used to walk around 7 km in 1 and hour to reach my pre scholl at the age its hard to walk that much long distance with bare foot at the time there is mostly no vehicle transport except cycles or own legs . But, now every school has their own transporting system they can easily went to school on time in bus without any diificulty. the technology is the reason to work in that happy life.
More over, to use the every technology the person must be alive in the world to use it and the science and technology also helping every person in the world my giving them medical support my numerous machines are using to treat peoples even from other counntries by IOT technology there is not only one thing science and technology everywhere in the world let imagine the life without mobile and vehicles that is un imaginable.
many people says increasing the technology leads humans to lazyness yes may be some may be lazy But those who really need it that is boon to them
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... development of science and technology. this two things has solution for every probe...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... solution for every probelm in the world . Walking with bare foot to flying in th...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...es not support it may takes much longer also . But, now with the mobiles can easily ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ot support it may takes much longer also . But, now with the mobiles can easily to...
^^
Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...icle transport except cycles or own legs . But, now every school has their own tra...
^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'go', 'wend'
Suggestion: go; wend
...own transporting system they can easily went to school on time in bus without any di...
^^^^
Line 4, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... on time in bus without any diificulty. the technology is the reason to work in tha...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...le and vehicles that is un imaginable. many people says increasing the technology l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46049046322 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30612136787 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534059945504 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.264396958 60.3974514979 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.7 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171330107278 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628553077458 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459940178023 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901685506623 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461807554256 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 48.8420337079 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... development of science and technology. this two things has solution for every probe...
^^^^
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... solution for every probelm in the world . Walking with bare foot to flying in th...
^^
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...es not support it may takes much longer also . But, now with the mobiles can easily ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ot support it may takes much longer also . But, now with the mobiles can easily to...
^^
Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...icle transport except cycles or own legs . But, now every school has their own tra...
^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'go', 'wend'
Suggestion: go; wend
...own transporting system they can easily went to school on time in bus without any di...
^^^^
Line 4, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... on time in bus without any diificulty. the technology is the reason to work in tha...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...le and vehicles that is un imaginable. many people says increasing the technology l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46049046322 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30612136787 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534059945504 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.264396958 60.3974514979 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.7 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171330107278 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628553077458 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459940178023 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901685506623 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461807554256 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 48.8420337079 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.