Do you agree with the idea that technology help you a lot? why?
Technology is more and more development, thanks to it to give us benefits, I agree with this idea besides, we should constant the value of it and use it as a sharp tool for human being.
The model technology that make people feel more comfortable with their incredible advantage, the fast-growth has brought to us a lot of profit such as quick information, high productivity,… and a thousand of facilities that we are using nowadays they’re all have interfere with technology. Our model life might be called Information Age. Parallel, there are several negative aspect of advantage technology that we need to confront with.
Technology make our dream become true, it’s not surprise if you are living in a tech savvy house with all of the model device, and imagine how much it’s convenient is, robot will help you to do every chores, you don’t need to wait time to make a timetable for your diet, a smart refrigerator will help you to estimate to the calories that you need for your health. Even though you are not home you can control everything by mobile that connected with internet, from office that you can observe your house through camera system, in case of you go out and not sure whether you forgot to turn off gas or not. Thank to digital format was setup , the smart system also help you monitor and turn off the light automatically when no one at home, equivalent to turn off the air conditioner when no one at room, those are good way to use energy efficiently.
However, the over dependence on technology is not the good thing, try imagining that , by somehow that the power go out and cannot go online, this case should be a devil for the people who addicted to the internet. After long time that people do not know how to do with cleaning and robot seem to replace to the human a lot. Go further more, that human might not live with assistance of robot, if this case happened, so human will place themselves in danger that one day robot will wide out all of us and conquest earth because of the artificial intelligence’s development.
Technology role in important part in our living, we need to continue to develop it with our intelligence, control them to serve for our demands.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-09 | vidung | 90 | view |
| 2024-11-07 | hahoaan | 89 | view |
| 2024-11-06 | Nguyen Thinh | 56 | view |
| 2024-11-06 | phannhi1511@ | 56 | view |
| 2024-11-06 | Nhi3132006 | 56 | view |
- Some people feel that advertising has negative effects on our society because it encourages people to buy more unneeded items while others feel that it is beneficial for our economy Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and 78
- The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010 67
- The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The provided bar chart illustrates the production of coffee produced by three different nations during the period of 20 years starting from 1990 Looking at the graph it is clearly seen that there are increases in the coffee production manufactured by Braz
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... as quick information, high productivity,… and a thousand of facilities that we ar...
^^
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'interfered'.
Suggestion: interfered
... we are using nowadays they’re all have interfere with technology. Our model life might b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'aspects'?
Suggestion: aspects
...e. Parallel, there are several negative aspect of advantage technology that we need to...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecome true, it’s not surprise if you are living in a tech savvy house with all o...
^^
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if you are living in a tech savvy house with all of the model device, and imagin...
^^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...are living in a tech savvy house with all of the model device, and imagine how much it’s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r not. Thank to digital format was setup , the smart system also help you monitor ...
^^
Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt system also help you monitor and turn off the light automatically when no one ...
^^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s not the good thing, try imagining that , by somehow that the power go out and ca...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64961636829 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66437609217 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547314578005 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.368300593 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.272727273 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5454545455 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37145402595 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118277550173 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990051975076 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153780558181 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10263928689 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.