In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?
It is true that despite the advances made in the field of agriculture, numerous people around the world are still starved. This essay will examine what the causes of this phenomenon and offer some feasible to them.
This is mainly because there are fewer farmers in the world to produce food these days, especially after the horrible pandemic called Covid-19. Numerous people lost their job and their houses specifically farmers. They can not sell their products as before the pandemic, which leads to the fact that there are so many people still going hungry despite the advances made in agriculture. Another vital reason for this problem is that some countries are too poor to continuously purchase food for their own citizens. This is why in spite of the advances made in husbandry, there are still so many people starving.
There are several solutions, nevertheless, can be adopted to tackle the problem. A particular solution for this specific problem is to appeal to wealthy countries for budgets to eliminate the obstacles for the pooer countries. As humans, we should help each other and develop our community to become a better world. Another solution to solve this difficulty is that we can donate to charity funds that help starving people and we should help them to find proper jobs so that they can purchase their own meals.
In conclusion, despite of the advances made in the field of agriculture, numerous people around the world are still starved, one of the reasons is because of there are fewer farmers in the world to produce food these days because of the pandemic Covid-19. A solution for this problem is that we can donate charity funds to the poorer countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to starve' or 'starve'.
Suggestion: to starve; starve
...e can donate to charity funds that help starving people and we should help them to find ...
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...that help starving people and we should help them to find proper jobs so that they can purchase t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chase their own meals. In conclusion, despite of the advances made in the fiel...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tarved, one of the reasons is because of there are fewer farmers in the world to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, still, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 285.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94035087719 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49353488453 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463157894737 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6208297025 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387580233944 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143546065198 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981250938316 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249938275233 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663790822166 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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