Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom.Do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to state that freedom play imperative role in anyone life to pass it happily.Few individuals believe that at present pupils have too much liberation.I strongly agree with this statement as they have numerous option for education and they can do marriage according to their choice.
To commence with,children use new electronic gadgets.They use modern techniques for their entertainment because their parents give freedom to use them.Resultantly,kids can pester to their procreator to buy expensive things.In addition to this, they can wear clothes that they want.When kids have freedom to wear anything,they can wear western dresses.To exemplify, today most of children try new garments like top and jeans.
Moving further,educators have more choices in education system. As they have too much privileges they can choose subject in their study that they want.eventually,they can enhance their knowledge.Moreover,they can do marriage according to their desire.children have right to took their own life decisions so they can do wedding with their loved ones.To epitome, modern children do marriage where they want.So,how children have not too much freedom if they have a right to take their own decision?
However some people counterclaim that in some areas girls do not work at night.Individuals do not allow women to do job at late night and they have no freedom as men.Consequently,girls do not enjoy their life.What is more,in some religions girls are married at early age,they are not get pleasure in their lives.To cute an example ,in Bihar girls marriage doing in early stage.
Recapitulate, undoubtedly,everyone should have liberation to enjoy their entire life. Although in some religions girls are married at early age, yet mentees have more choices in education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48014440433 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5772001928 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.734199454 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.857142857 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5714285714 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234261623716 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112248475819 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591986205753 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141484756279 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485666146668 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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