You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In my opinion, governments and large companies can make a big difference to the environment, but individuals can too!
First, it it worth noting that large companies consumes more natural resource and produce more waste - either trash, polluted water or greenhouse gases, or possibly all of them. Therefore, they are most responsible for the worsening condition of the environment. They can reduce the resources and power consumption to generate less waste, as well as invest more and more into preserving the nature for their own sustainable development, as they are really, really rich.
As for the governments: they have the forces to make anyone obey the laws for their goals, and as pressure on protecting the environment from activists and citizens becomes stronger, they have to take it into account also for sustainable development. The United Nations also plays a vital role in forcing its members to make greater efforts to save the planet and prevent pollution. They can, by applying really high tax rates on parties that release a huge amount of pollutants, prevent the environment from being deteriorated any further, as well as use those taxes to better preserve beaches, forests, fields and sea - what contributes to their development (especially economic). That way, they can please citizens and satisfy their needs for longer.
So what can we individuals do? We can just clean the environment around our houses, area or neighborhood. Just clean the trash there, and tell people to litter at the right place. That way, we can still make a difference. Even one person, namely Greta Thurnberg, changed the world's opinion on this matter!
To sum up, I totally disagree. Everyone can make the environment - and so, the planet - better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'obeys'.
Suggestion: obeys
...ts: they have the forces to make anyone obey the laws for their goals, and as pressu...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...on, namely Greta Thurnberg, changed the worlds opinion on this matter! To sum up, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, still, therefore, well, as for, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17605633803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80953204168 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.2710183557 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21576030285 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840799323221 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679126206534 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138033080374 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710403242421 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.