Many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping
Nowadays it is believed that many costumer changes a new different for shopping that they choose visited in a more big shopping centre than small local shopping, I my self believe with this argument that because it has more negative impact rather than the positive impact for some reason.
One the one hand, the main negative impact for costumers have a moved to a big shopping centre than still in a local shopping centre because, whereas small shopping lost the costumer a small local is can be seen that the shop head can loosing costumer and go bankrupt therefor, the local small shopping should has a new variation and add a famaous current so that the costumer still choice a little shop for shopping for instance, like a shop head make a discount and improving the stuff such as for the stuff, make up, and equipment for twice a week so the costumer can interested and want to come at the little centre.
However, recently there a more positive impact for a costumer went to changing this choice to a big shopping centre than a small shopping for take a needs like for a daily live because when a costumers want to visited a more big centre it can found for all needs and equipment moreover, the shopping centre more modern and the place is a good than a small shopping for example when costumers want to visited at mall Grand Indonesia it has 7 floors with a different stuff and food in every floors so the costumer more comfortable and addicted for come back at a mall again. As result a mall can more flexible for found equipment because lots of stuff available and centre in the city.
For summarize, for growth the shopping centre can make a big impact for a little local shopping and any harmful for hand shop, so it is better for a little shop want to remove a new style and add new option like online shopping to costumer is interested.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50445103858 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36203271546 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394658753709 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.462108306 49.4020404114 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.6 106.682146367 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.4 20.7667163134 325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291252303972 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192765001127 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07929304399 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224453605783 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508427322441 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 13.0946893788 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 9.78957915832 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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